Line(s) of the Day #SheLovedMeOnce

She loved me once and I threw it away
A love so pure there was plenty to spare
And yet not enough for me to keep
And not enough for me to share

Her and I loved in different ways, speeds and styles
At contrasting times and in different places
Her love for me now sat with old newspapers
Faded clothes, expired milk and long-forgotten faces

But my love for her caught in a sandtimer
With my heart waiting for the last grain to fall
Memories varying from light to dark and dark to light
And questions and questions challenging it all

Whether better to have loved and lost I’m not certain
I wanted to love you the way you did me
My love took too long to catch up with yours
And you never slowed down, more’s the pity

I will let go, I hold on with fewer fingers now
The future is coming into view more than the past
But while we’ll never be that us again
Your role in my life will last

After finding an old poem Some Things, I decided to fine tune another poem I wrote while back.

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34 thoughts on “Line(s) of the Day #SheLovedMeOnce

  1. The sandtimer line is brilliant. Wonderful imagery throughout. Really lovely to see your poetic side.. Good stuff.

    Write on, mate. Cheers but no jeers, only two thumbs up and a red solo cup 😜

  2. Nicely done, Alex. I like the “hold on with fewer fingers’ line, too. Very nostalgic and wistful. ❀ Keep sharing these!

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